Skip to main content

How to write breakup scenes

Avoid clichés

Break-up scenes tend to be clichés because we have read about ten thousand breakups before. Try to think of your characters - how would they break up? If your characters have a unique story together, then their break up is more likely to be unique.

Make it matter

The goal with a break up is to make the reader really feel the pain and frustration that the break up contains - so let the break up matter to your characters!

But why?

Make it clear why they are breaking up. It should matter for the direction of the plot or character and not just be a thing you use to add drama to your story.

Comments

Post a Comment

Popular posts from this blog

A song for the daughters on reaping day in my main character's village

The Reaping Song Verse 1: When the moon is full and bright And the shadows dance in the night We hear the whispers in our ears The Reaping is drawing near Chorus: They come to take the chosen ones To train them as the council's sons They make them kill without remorse They make them serve the darkened force Verse 2: We never know who they will pick We only hope they do it quick We hug our daughters and we pray The Reaping will spare them today Chorus: They come to take the chosen ones To train them as the council's sons They make them kill without remorse They make them serve the darkened force Verse 3: We see the cloaks and hear the bells We know they cast their wicked spells We watch them drag the girls away The Reaping has claimed them today Chorus: They come to take the chosen ones To train them as the council's sons They make them kill without remorse They make them serve the darkened force Outro: The Reaping is over for now But we know they will come back somehow We l...
Post a Comment
Read more

Share your writing space

Post a Comment
Read more

This or that: Writer's edition

Writing in bed or writing at a desk                   • For me it's writing at a desk, I just feel more productive at a desk rather than in bed and at my "desk" I have more quiet time versus my room at the moment.  Listening to music or writing in silence           • I have to write with music or some type of background noise, the quiet irritates me and makes me feel uncomfortable.  Plotting or Pantsing              • I'm both actually, I plot while I go otherwise my work in progress goes off script if I pre-plot and then I have to scrap my outline.  Killing off characters or writing romantic subplots          • I do both of these to be honest, but I'm more likely to kill off characters than to go through with the romantic subplot.  Publish traditionally or self publish       • I really don't know about this one si...
Post a Comment
Read more