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Book Review: Marked by PC and Kirsten Cast

Introduction 

Marked by PC and Kirsten Cast is a young adult fantasy novel that was published in 2007. It is the first book in the House of Night series, which follows the adventures of Zoey Redbird, a teenager who is chosen by the goddess Nyx to become a vampyre. The book explores themes such as identity, friendship, loyalty, betrayal, and destiny. In this review, I will argue that Marked is an entertaining and engaging read that introduces a unique and intriguing world of vampyres, but also suffers from some flaws in characterization, dialogue, and plot.

Summary

The book begins with Zoey being marked by a Tracker, a vampyre who selects new fledglings to join the House of Night, a boarding school where they will undergo the Change, a process that will either turn them into adult vampyres or kill them. Zoey is shocked and scared by her new situation but also feels a special connection to Nyx, who grants her a rare affinity for all five elements: air, fire, water, earth, and spirit. At the House of Night, Zoey meets new friends, such as Stevie Rae, Damien, Erin, and Shaunee, who form her circle of power. She also makes enemies, such as Aphrodite, the leader of the Dark Daughters, a prestigious group of fledglings who serve Nyx, and her ex-boyfriend Heath, who is obsessed with her and follows her to school. Zoey soon discovers that there is more to the House of Night than meets the eye and that she has a crucial role to play in the battle between good and evil.

Critique 

Marked is a novel that offers a fresh and original take on the vampire genre, by creating a world where vampyres are not undead creatures, but living beings who have a special bond with the goddess Nyx. The authors use a lot of mythology, symbolism, and lore to enrich their story and make it more appealing to fantasy fans. The book also tackles some relevant issues that young readers can relate to, such as peer pressure, bullying, sexuality, and self-esteem. The book is fast-paced and action-packed, with plenty of twists and turns that keep the reader hooked and curious about what will happen next.

However, the book also has some weaknesses that detract from its overall quality. One of them is the characterization, which is often shallow and stereotypical. The main character, Zoey, is supposed to be a strong and smart heroine, but she often comes across as immature, judgmental, and hypocritical. She constantly criticizes other characters for their appearance, behavior, or choices, but she does not see her own flaws or mistakes. She also has a tendency to lie, cheat, and manipulate others, especially when it comes to her romantic relationships. She has three love interests in the book, but none of them are developed or convincing. The other characters are also not very well-rounded or realistic, and they often fall into clichés, such as the gay best friend, the mean girl, the nerd, and the jock. The dialogue is another weak point of the book, as it is often awkward, unnatural, and full of slang and pop culture references that make it sound dated and forced. The plot is also not very coherent or consistent, and it relies on a lot of coincidences, conveniences, and contrivances to move forward. The book also has some editing and formatting errors that distract from the reading experience.

Conclusion

Marked is a book that has some merits, such as its original and captivating world of vampyres, its fast and exciting pace, and its relevant and relatable themes. However, it also has some flaws, such as its poor characterization, dialogue, and plot, that prevent it from being a great book

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